Bravo! Very good, Al. I didn't like the fat girl comments but the rest of it was excellent :)
I promise you I didn't like them either, its actually something that makes me angry.Eventually I grew up I promise!
So many lessons to learn, so little time... enjoyed the story, AB3!
So many lessons to learn, so little time... great story AB3!
That was excellent, Al. Thanks for letting me read pieces of it along the way while you were creating. I went wild over the ending.SL