tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post8147917326923181255..comments2024-01-14T10:50:47.088-05:00Comments on The Wit And Weirdness Of Al Bruno III: The Nick Of Time (and other abrasions): The Chosen and The Damnedalbruno3http://www.blogger.com/profile/01410254757982165309noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-7262134200390475802009-10-25T09:24:55.115-04:002009-10-25T09:24:55.115-04:00Nice balance of present action and back story.Nice balance of present action and back story.Donald Conradhttp://flashtold.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-18596182617488064112009-10-24T21:15:49.309-04:002009-10-24T21:15:49.309-04:00The typos pulled me out, but the story is excellen...The typos pulled me out, but the story is excellent! Chilling...Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-30281302378981693042009-10-23T14:47:53.771-04:002009-10-23T14:47:53.771-04:00Augh! That ending sentence! Fixed it though...Augh! That ending sentence! Fixed it though...https://www.blogger.com/profile/09492062472206579391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-61862013667165271292009-10-23T14:43:28.444-04:002009-10-23T14:43:28.444-04:00This is intriguing! Though I think you need to pro...This is intriguing! Though I think you need to proofread it through again, and fix several typos throughout, including the ending sentence?Marisa Birnshttp://www.oooalice.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com