tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post5108788880837075362..comments2024-01-14T10:50:47.088-05:00Comments on The Wit And Weirdness Of Al Bruno III: The Nick Of Time (and other abrasions): Behind The Panic Room Dooralbruno3http://www.blogger.com/profile/01410254757982165309noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-81850540429698134452011-03-06T12:07:10.289-05:002011-03-06T12:07:10.289-05:00Great job created the tense scene opening up. Inte...Great job created the tense scene opening up. Interesting the way this plays with the emotions; I initially have sympathy for him but it dries up. I was intrigued by the effect of the phone call; deliciously unusual and makes you realize Earle's got no hope.AidanFhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09876041003278004627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-1773234924331142162011-03-05T17:27:09.469-05:002011-03-05T17:27:09.469-05:00Wow, very very intense. It's hard to feel sorr...Wow, very very intense. It's hard to feel sorry for the guy, but I hate to think what happens to him. I sure would not want to get on Zeth's bad side. Deanna's right, that is a terrific last line.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://madutopia.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-24853502665746836572011-03-05T08:21:05.985-05:002011-03-05T08:21:05.985-05:00Zeth makes regular appearances in my Nick of Time ...Zeth makes regular appearances in my Nick of Time (and other abrasions) stories such as 'You Can't Get There From Here', 'The Trailer Park Of Dracula' and 'Maxwell's Silver Hammer'.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09492062472206579391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-30296735959782863732011-03-05T07:38:28.924-05:002011-03-05T07:38:28.924-05:00I'm tense now. Maybe he deserved it but since ...I'm tense now. Maybe he deserved it but since this is from Earle's POV, I'm empathetic to his fear and don't want to see him a bloody mess.<br /><br />Not saying he doesn't deserve it.<br /><br />Haven't been around in a while. Zeth is an interesting character. Is he part of other stories?pegjethttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8913009842235805193.post-38521639447685360532011-03-04T12:19:48.255-05:002011-03-04T12:19:48.255-05:00Oh, great last line Al! Great all the way around i...Oh, great last line Al! Great all the way around in fact.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com