Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Chapter 11 is a little early...
But you won't hold that against me will you?
Keep circulating the blog!
Keep circulating the blog!
In The Shadow Of His Nemesis chapter eleven

BY
AL BRUNO III
AL BRUNO III
Thursday November 8th 1996
Sunlight glistened through the streaked windshield of the Honda Civic; somewhere a car horn bleated a long ugly note. Isobel stirred groggily, peeling her face from the drool-sticky passenger seat. The cuts on her arm had dried and scabbed, her blouse had become stuck to it. The wound in her side was still sore and weeping blood but at least it was less than before. She had fallen asleep worrying about stitches and blood loss but afraid to go to a hospital.
"Run if you want. We'll catch up to you later."
"Oh my God." she whispered. Her car was a park that only really got used by high school kids and that was just for partying and making out. "Oh God." Isobel cupped a hand across her mouth. She could still smell the odor of gunpowder on her fingers. Her gag reflex twitched and her mind rebelled.
Isobel put a hand on the cold steering wheel, pumped the gas pedal twice and turned the key. The engine coughed miserably.
What am I going to do? She wondered
"Run if you want. We'll catch up to you later."
Isobel put her car into drive. Why hadn’t she waited for Galen? Or tried to rescue him? Was she that much of a coward? Was it because she had glimpsed his world and wanted no part of it? She drove slowly towards the exit of the park and when she got to the main street, she merged with traffic. She asked herself what the intruders in her apartment had been.
Monsters.
And what, she wondered darkly, do they want with Galen?
The Honda Civic sped up but Isobel still didn’t know where she was going. Then she made a decision and headed for the Thruway. A few well timed U-turns later and she found herself where it all began. She pulled off to the side of the road near where Galen had emerged from and got out of her car. The night had made every landmark seem vast and threatening, but by the light of day Isobel saw its true face. The blacktop itself was not really black but a weather-beaten gray; the woods of roadside might have seemed deep and primeval but were really nothing more than a cluster of sad-looking trees. Somewhere high tension wires throbbed, setting Isobel's teeth on edge.
Occasionally a car whooshed by, the sound of its passing somehow sounding vaguely mournful to her. She started walking leaving the side of the road behind.
What am I expecting to find here?
Something.
Anything.
A gust of wind blew her hair into her face, temporarily blinding her. As her fingers pulled it clear Isobel felt a moment of dreadful certainty that when she cleared her vision Helen Ginnmett and Piers Sauno would be there.
She bit her lip and parted her lids. She was alone.
Deeper into the woods her foot brushed against something, it was a shoe, a brown shoe. Although it wasn’t much of a shoe anymore, it looked as though if had been gnawed to pieces. Curiosity had hold of her and she made her way further in. Just beyond the trees she found a small clearing, a stunted meadow. Ankle length grass shifted in the wind. The bright cloud-free sun made her squint as she scanned her surroundings. She saw a figure crouching against a tree.
Isobel stopped breathing, she backed up getting ready to run. She was too far from her Civic now, too far from witnesses. Anything could happen to her out here and no one would ever know.
But the figure didn’t acknowledge her and Isobel risked a few steps closer.
It was a man, and she saw that he wasn’t crouching; he was slumping against the tree. His posture was too relaxed for him to me anything but –
Dead. Oh God he’s dead.
Seeing a second dead body in so short a time was bad enough but when she realized how quickly she calmed down a heartbeat or three later she almost felt guilty. Drawing nearer she saw the coin sized hole in the side of his temple and the spray of blood that had run down and dried on the bark of the tree.
Speaking of blood, I still might need to get to a doctor. I still might need stitches.
But there would be time for that later. She needed to know more. If she was going to survive this she was going to have to learn everything she could.
The dead man had a sharp suit and ragged features. And an earring? There was a gun in the dead man’s hand, it was the very opposite of Cheryl’s slender automatic weapon - this was a bulky, grimy looking revolver. Isobel pulled the gun free of his stiffened fingers. A sour taste started to build up in her mouth but she held it at bay.
How many bullets left? How do you pop open the cylinder thing and check? Can I do it without shooting myself?
Isobel cast a furtive glance this way and that, and then started going through the dead man’s pockets.
She found a book of matches from someplace called Club Bes, a handful of mints and a velvet drawstring bag. Isobel jostled the bag in her hand hearing the contents clink together like a fistful of marbles. She pocketed her findings, gun and all, and then tried to find the dead man’s wallet.
If he falls on me I’ll go crazy. I know I will.
Three stifled breaths later and she had it, a leather billfold thick with cash. Isobel thumbed through it; it was all fifties and hundreds, more cash than she ever saw in a month of paychecks.
Mobsters or monsters? Or both? And what do they want with Galen?
A pair of dentures fell from the dead man’s mouth with a dry plop!
Isobel screamed and ran back to her car.
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Monday, May 4, 2009
Saturday, May 2, 2009
INSIDE (2007)

Well that was intense... in fact it was almost a little too intense for me...
Wow. Did I really say that? I must getting old.
I ended up seeing Alfred Hitchcock's Psycho at a young age (on PBS of all places!) and that put me in a place where stories about rampaging nutcases wielding sharp things don't usually do much for me. Oh there will always be exceptions to the rule like Silence of the Lambs, the original Halloween, Curtains and Audition but most of the time I could care less what Leatherface and Jason are up to.
And just to show you how much of a hypocrite I am my favorite horror film is still Phantasm and the Tall Man has plenty of stabby moments in that film to say the least. (And don't get me started on those balls of his!)
So I guess if your garden variety slasher reveals he did it all because he was possessed by the spirit of Cthulhu's sweatsock I might be more interested but otherwise give me the weird stuff, give me The Masque of the Red Death instead of The Fall of the House of Usher.
So what does Inside have to do with all this?
Inside is the story of a pregnant woman alone on Christmas eve finding herself stalked by a madwoman determined to take the baby from her. And did I mention said madwoman is carrying scissors?
Well I have heard a lot about the movie over the last year or so but I can't say I was in a rush to see it. Luck and a rare bit of free time gave me a chance to watch the film and let me just say that, if you have the stomach for it, this is one HELL of a movie. I literally squirmed in my seat- remember that intense, mad and stomach-turning final 20 minutes of Takashi Miike's Audition?
Well Inside is like that for over an hour.
The performances from the two lead actresses will keep you riveted, Béatrice Dalle especially. She creates an antagonist as pathetic as she is terrifying. If I have one complaint about the film, I think it could have gone with out one less set piece. They almost overdo it.
But the images, and questions, this film leaves you with will stay with you a while.
Inside is a keeper... I just don't know how long it will be before I have the nerve to watch it again.
And... in a final creepy postscript... doesn't the film's villainess Béatrice Dalle look a little like the Octomom?

Brrrrrrrr
Friday, May 1, 2009
Friday Best of My Blogroll
Well here were are again... I have no best website of the week this time because they were all pretty cool.
Kindertrauma forced me to remember the most disturbing episode of Little House On The Prairie ever! And after I had worked so hard to suppress it! (Still not as bad as that The Waltons one with the poltergeist though...)
Do you suffer from the disorder known as Elf Rage? Read this thought-provoking piece from Burning Zeppelin Experience and decide for yourself.
DarcKnyt mused about horror films that moved or disappointed him. He also looked for suggestions for some other horror movies to try out. Always a subject I like to barge in on.
Gone and Forgotten thrilled us with tales of the Justice League fighting their own uniforms!
Monster Crazy showed me a cast photo from The Comedy of Terrors that I had never seen.
Once again Mad Mad Mad Mad Movies makes intrigues me with a movie I had never heard of before. This one is called The Night God Screamed, the title alone is gold I tells ya. GOLD!
The Haunted Closet had scans from a graphic novel adaption of Dracula by artist Fernando Fernandez. It looks like its off to the used bookstore so I can try to score a copy.
The Lighning Bug's Lair posted a nice review of Let's Scare Jessca To Death- a horror film more people should know about.
Monster Brains just has some great art from just about everywhere to look at.
Francis Hogan added a new page to My Supa Life and the world rejoiced!
Meanwhile I have the latest installment of In The Shadow Of His Nemesis ready for Wednesday and I may have broken through the mental logjam keeping me stuck around chapter 50 or so... (Yes it is going to go on that long... at least!) I also found the lost pages and notes for part three of my Star Wars fans vs Zombies saga, I may have something new to show you on that front sometime soon.
Also I still haven't had any visitors from Montana or North Dakota yet... what's it gonna take?
Kindertrauma forced me to remember the most disturbing episode of Little House On The Prairie ever! And after I had worked so hard to suppress it! (Still not as bad as that The Waltons one with the poltergeist though...)
Do you suffer from the disorder known as Elf Rage? Read this thought-provoking piece from Burning Zeppelin Experience and decide for yourself.
DarcKnyt mused about horror films that moved or disappointed him. He also looked for suggestions for some other horror movies to try out. Always a subject I like to barge in on.
Gone and Forgotten thrilled us with tales of the Justice League fighting their own uniforms!
Monster Crazy showed me a cast photo from The Comedy of Terrors that I had never seen.
Once again Mad Mad Mad Mad Movies makes intrigues me with a movie I had never heard of before. This one is called The Night God Screamed, the title alone is gold I tells ya. GOLD!
The Haunted Closet had scans from a graphic novel adaption of Dracula by artist Fernando Fernandez. It looks like its off to the used bookstore so I can try to score a copy.
The Lighning Bug's Lair posted a nice review of Let's Scare Jessca To Death- a horror film more people should know about.
Monster Brains just has some great art from just about everywhere to look at.
Francis Hogan added a new page to My Supa Life and the world rejoiced!
Meanwhile I have the latest installment of In The Shadow Of His Nemesis ready for Wednesday and I may have broken through the mental logjam keeping me stuck around chapter 50 or so... (Yes it is going to go on that long... at least!) I also found the lost pages and notes for part three of my Star Wars fans vs Zombies saga, I may have something new to show you on that front sometime soon.
Also I still haven't had any visitors from Montana or North Dakota yet... what's it gonna take?
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